Peer Review Comments

For Yen:
Write the questions you answered at the top before intro. In the introduction do TAGS and also summarize the whole book not just the second half of it. The whole essay seems like you are summarizing or saying the plot of the book. Also, talk more about the purpose of the book, because like I said before it seems like you summarized most of the book. Also it needs a conclusion. Good post though breh breh.


For Troy:
In the first question, address why this book would be better for young adults to read than younger kids. Why shouldn't younger kids read this book? etc. Also you need another CD/CM, but I think it still is good without another one. You should talk more about the plot because it is confusing of what you are talking about like "unwound." I thought you did good on the second question, pretty solid part of book review. Solid post overall, keep it up.


For Kathy:
Put the questions at the top before intro. The book review feels as if it is mostly summarizing, by the way summarize more in the intro. In the comparisons with the other books, make the differences more clear because it sort of just changes topic or difference. Use transitions from each difference. A rating of the book or recommendation would be nice (if you want to). Nice book review Katt Williams :).